Comments on: It wasn’t like him to be so mysterious

By: quinncreative

quinncreative — Wed, 04 Nov 2009 00:55:08 +0000

Or copper or zinc? Or molybdinum? There’s a rule about writing, “Show, don’t tell.” Yep, they should have told a LOT less.

By: Robin

Robin — Tue, 13 Oct 2009 00:27:31 +0000

Just tried them that way. It helped, but this one in particular was still creepy: was still waiting for the slasher to jump out at her, LOL….

By: Lammy

Lammy — Mon, 12 Oct 2009 20:58:07 +0000

That would have just been a lot better on mute.
Maybe then would it have more impact.

By: Robin

Robin — Mon, 12 Oct 2009 17:10:09 +0000

Exactly!

By: bergere

bergere — Mon, 12 Oct 2009 16:14:26 +0000

Platinum–the fragrance for the disappointed divorcee cougar in everywoman.

By: miss kitty v.

miss kitty v. — Sun, 11 Oct 2009 19:48:05 +0000

Yeah, not romantic–creepy.

By: Robin

Robin — Sun, 11 Oct 2009 13:35:11 +0000

Ugh.

By: Tama

Tama — Sun, 11 Oct 2009 02:46:55 +0000

What creeped me out a little is that I think the voiceover for Silver is the woman who does the voiceovers for the HBO “Autopsy” documentaries. Maybe that’s why CSI came to mind.

By: Robin

Robin — Sun, 11 Oct 2009 01:01:56 +0000

I thought Silver was the best of the 3, but yes, ill advised.

By: Robin

Robin — Sun, 11 Oct 2009 01:01:02 +0000

That line was particularly bad.